Hi Victoria! haha… subscribing to those comments must have been horrible! I'd love to see your paragraph but I don't want to wade through all the entries to find it. Can you post it here?
I would, but I've already re-written it. (Of course.) Here's the newest version and please feel free to suggest improvements: In the Ron Empire, wars did not erupt over cups of rice wine, which was why Liu Jie stopped at the Peach Orchard Inn. The modest, tamped-earth building promised wine and rest from months of travel and skirmishes with bandits.
Did you see how many comments there were?! Over 1000!
I made the mistake of selecting email notifications of later responses. I have to empty my inbox every thirty minutes now. I feel for Nathan.
Hi Victoria! haha… subscribing to those comments must have been horrible! I'd love to see your paragraph but I don't want to wade through all the entries to find it. Can you post it here?
I would, but I've already re-written it. (Of course.) Here's the newest version and please feel free to suggest improvements:
In the Ron Empire, wars did not erupt over cups of rice wine, which was why Liu Jie stopped at the Peach Orchard Inn. The modest, tamped-earth building promised wine and rest from months of travel and skirmishes with bandits.
Ooops, and thank you for coming to see me, Maya! Normally I'm not too scatterbrained, but I'm technically working right now. ;D